求翻译！哪位英语学霸帮我翻译下！ 现在很多人家里都有电脑，很多年轻人都会使用电脑。电脑有很多好处

Now many people have a computer, many young people can use computer. Computer has many advantages: computer can help us to query data, learning more knowledge . Computer can also be used to chat with friends and family, and you can meet new friends on the internet. Computer can also be used to play games,it makes people smarter. But the computer has many disadvantages too， many students are too addicted to the game, which does harm to study, some students even skip class to go to Internet cafes! Making friends on the Internet, frequent chating, which led to a decline in academic performance.
My suggestion are below ，no Internet surfing in school , so as not to affect the learning. on the winter and summer vacation Internet are accessible。

现在很多人家里都有电脑，很多年轻人都会使用电脑。电脑有很多好处：电脑可以帮我们查询资料，学习更多知识（knowledge）。电脑还可以用来和朋友家人聊天，还可以在网上认识新朋友。电脑还可以玩游戏，使人更加聪明。但电脑也有很多坏处：许多学生过于沉迷游戏，对学习有害，甚至逃课去上网吧！在网上交朋友，经常聊天，导致学习成绩下降。对此我建议：在学校学习的时间不要上网，这样就不会影响学习。到放寒假和暑假的时候就上网。
Now many people have computers at home , many young people will use computers . Computer has many advantages : Can you help us information . Learning more knowledge . The computer can also be used to chat with friends and family can still make new friends online . You can also play computer games , make a person more intelligent . But computer also has many disadvantages : Many students indulging in games too bad for learning , and even skipping to the Internet ! Make friends on the Internet , chat , often lead to poor academic performance . My advice : For this time in school to learn not to the Internet , so as not to affect learning when to put winter and summer vacation .

today,many families have computer,many young man know how to use computer.computer has a lot of advantage,it helps us get more knowledge and we can use it to community with friends and families or make new friends on the internet.computter also has many disadvantage like students get addictived to it, go against studying,even skip classes for internet.make friends,chat with them online too often drops down marks.so i suggest : dont surf internet in school time so it wont affect study.only surf the internet at holidays.
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Now many people have a computer, many young people will use a computer. Computer has many advantages: computer can help us to query data, learning more knowledge (knowledge). Computer can also be used to chat with friends and family, and you can meet new friends on the internet. Computer can also play games, make people smarter. But the computer has many disadvantages: many students are too obsessed with the game, to learn the harmful, or even skip class to go to Internet cafes! Make friends on the Internet, often chat, led to a decline in academic performance. My suggestion: don't time in school online, so as not to affect the learning. To put the winter and summer vacation on the Internet