英语改错！

1 She is my dearest mother : 前后一直都用motherland, 这里就不适合用mother.
2. I love her long history. China has a long history of 5,000 years.这是中式英语， 改成China has a long history of 5,000 years I love her long history。或者干脆 I am proud of its long civilization 。
3. All sons and daughters of the Chinese nation are loved she.似乎应该改成All sons and daugthers of the Chinese nation love her.
4. Since founding似应改成：Since its founding
5. China has undergone enormous changes 似乎应该改成， The people's Republic China， 应为CHINA的成立应该是个和中华人民共和国的成立是两个不同的概念。
5. all we should study hard ，let our motherland more powerfull.似乎应该改成：so that we may contribute to the development of our motherland.

总体而言， 这是篇中式的英文。 有语法错误， 更有对英文文化和英语思维的陌生。

学习外语， 必须先了解这门外语的文化。

1.Mrs.
Johnson
gave
her
friends
Mary
and
me
a
tea
party.
Mrs后面有一个"."表示其是一个缩写词.
friends后面不应该有".".
"我"在这里即是动词"give"的宾语,又是"and"的宾语,应该用宾格.
2.He
was
warmly
welcomed
by
his
friends.
要用"welcome"的被动语态.
3.I
received
a
letter
written
in
green
ink.
由绿色墨水书写的,应该是用过去分词做定语.
4.The
old
man
walked
cross
the
street
slowly.
建议把副词"slowly"放在句尾."cross"可做介词,我认为不需要更改.
5.The
boy's
face
is
like
his
father's.
做比较应该是同一类的事物,"father's"表示的是"父亲的脸",前后一致了.
6.The
weather
was
so
hot
that
we
could
not
read
much.
"so...that..."句型,表示如此...以至于...
Hope
the
above
will
be
of
help.

1.
every→each
every不是代词，不能在后面加of结构。
2.
talk→speak
“说某种语言”时用speak
3.
去掉of
或
在of与peoople中间加入the
此处主语为特指。
4.
in→for
表示“哪餐吃什么食物”时，用介词for连接
5.
speaking-English→English-speaking
English-speaking是复合形容词，意思是“说英语的”。
6.
the
shoes
shop→the
shoe
shop
名词修饰名词时，一般用其单数形式
7.
and→but
根据后句句意，为“我不饿，但是很渴”。
8.
is
it→it
is
宾语从句的句序为陈述句序，而不是倒装句序。
9.
you'll
cold→you'll
be
cold
形容词不能单独做谓语，需加be动词
10.
最后一个hospitals→hospital
a
different
hospital意思是“一个不同的医院”，当然是单数。

1:Don't
worry
.
Your
son
may
be
at
the
cinema.
1.别着急。你儿子可能在电影院。
may和be要分开写，表示可能在。。。如果是maybe就是作副词用
2:The
meeting
will
not
begin
until
everyone
is
here.
2.要等到所有人都到齐，会议才能开始。
not...until
表示直到。。。才///
3:He
looked
around
,but
saw
nothing.
3.他环顾四周，但什么也没看到。
look
是强调看的动作，see强调看的结果。
4:Excuse
me.
Which
is
the
way
to
the
toilet?
或Excuse
me.
Where
is
the
toilet?
4.对不起，请问洗手间在哪里？
这个好象没什么错误，如果非要改。。就照上面改吧。