中译英，急 论网络环境下隐私权的保护

The freeness and openess of the internet has attracted a great number of internet users.Because the internet provide people with a space that can free their spirit to fully show and develop themselves.But this kind of freeness also cause an issue of personal pravacy being infringed .And it makes the personal pravacy suffer greatly from a unprecedented challege.This status of problem has severly hindered the further development of electrical business and the internet economy.So how to protect the personal pravacy under the position of internet has become an impotant task/topic in both the academic field and business field.
原中文不是很难，英文还是挺好翻的！
楼主是不是应该出点分啊。我翻的好辛苦啊~

Internet freedom and openness attracted numerous web users, because network provide people with a free spirit that can display and development space. But this freedom, optional also fostered more privacy tort issues, making the network space by an individual privacy challenge, this situation has seriously hindered the electronic commerce network and the further development of economy. How to protect the privacy of individuals under the network environment has become an important topic of academic and industrial.