On the first day I went to the high school, our(旦简主宾一致) head-teacher told us the news that(宾语从句不用模顷裤which) we needed to take military training. All of us were (very) shocked (被动分词), becasue it was so hot outside. How terrible it was, but we had no way to change that decision (词性错误). Then the next day, we saw(时态错误) our training instructor. He was young and handsome, although his skin was a little (a little of 后只加名词 这里是adj) black. To my surprise, all of the girls became energtic (词乎迅性错误),and boys listened to the instructor's words carefully(词性错误) too. In the evening, our training instrcutor adked us to sing the somgs about military. Meanwhile, we even competed with other teams. After having been(被动态) trained for a week, we found that the training instructor was a good guy / we found the training instructor a good guy (一句主句不能同时有两个动词. What's more, we became good friends (单复数) with him.
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