Dalian art academy of northeastern University is located in a pleasant climate and convenient transportation in Dalian
太中文化了,且有语法错误。按你的原文,“这个学校位于美好的天气”?
climate和 transportation都是修饰“大连”的,故改为:
Dalian Art Academy of Northeastern University is located in Dalian, a city with pleasant climate and convenient transportation.
东北大学大连艺术学院位于大连一个气候宜人交通便利的地方。
Dalian art academy of northeastern University is located in a pleasant climate and convenient transportation place in Dalian
语法上有错误,按你写的大意应该是东北大学在大连设的艺术专科学校是坐落在一个气候宜人、交通方便的地方。不知道对不对 不了解你要表达的意思 所以没办法帮你改 不好意思啊~~但肯定的是语法存在错误