ok I can help you.
first.健康比漂亮更重要:your helthy is more importent than your beauty.
学生以学习为主,不要过于注重外貌和别人的看法; and now ,you are a student so you first task is learning by the side you shouldn't take much care of your appearance or others' opinions.
可通过多锻练身体保持健康,要改变不良的饮食习惯; only you change your bad diet habit and keep a regular exercise can you get a helthy bady.
最后说一句,我是用写作文的形式用上了作文一般惯用的关联词,这样看起来更自然,也更像是你自己写的。
康比漂亮更重要
Health is more important than the beautiful
学生以学习为主
Students to learn based
学生以学习为主,不要过于注重外貌和别人的看法
Do not over-emphasis on appearance and views of others
可通过多锻练身体保持健康
Through more physical activity to stay healthy
要改变不良的饮食习惯
To change bad eating habits
健康的心态也很重要
Healthy attitude is also important
Health is more important than beauty.
As a student,study should be first,do not pay too much attention on appearance and others' opinions.
In order to keep health ,we should do as follows,
1.do more exercises,
2.change your bad diet habit,
3.you also should keep a healthy attitude
因为楼主的话好像有点不太连贯,所以我稍微改了一下,不知道这样合适不?
Health is more important than beauty . As a student , you should concentrate more on study rather than your appearance or views by others . Exercising more , quitting your current unfittable diet habits as well as a healthy mind status can make you fit
Health is more important than beauty.Students to learn, not too much stress on appearance and the opinions of others, Through many exercises to keep healthy body, to change the poor eating habits, A healthy state of mind is very important also, .