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Dear Classmates
A sudden storm attacked our county and it brought serious loses to the people. Seven people died and hundreds of people got hurt. Lots of people lost their home. After hearing this, people gave their hands as possible as they could. Being a students, we shouldn't fall behind. We should give them as much as we can. So why not devote you kindness and give your pocket money to the people who need it most. And what's more we shouldn't waste in the daily life.
Thanks.

Dear Classmates
A sudden storm attacked our county and it brought serious loses to the people. Seven people died and hundreds of people got hurt. Lots of people lost their home. After hearing this, people gave their hands as possible as they could. Being a students, we shouldn't fall behind. We should give them as much as we can. So why not devote you kindness and give your pocket money to the people who need it most. A

高考作文七诀窍
作文在考试中的重要性不容置疑，考生要想在高考中作文得高分，需要掌握以下7个要领：

1.明了高考作文的特性。高考作文不同于自由作文或文学创作。它在题目设置、形式内容、卷面字数等方面都有些特殊的要求。虽不可太受这些要求的限制，但也不能随心所欲。比如字数方面，要求字数不少于800字，有的考生只写三五百字，导致因内容单薄、字数不足而被扣去5分。而有的考生写得兴起，2000字还刹不住车，且不说文章写长了谋篇立意更难驾驭，光是时间安排上就失利了。

2.把握话题作文的特点。对于话题作文和命题作文、材料作文的异同，一定要心中有数。既不能天马行空，导致跑题，也不能把话题作文当命题作文或材料作文来写而只局限于某点发散不开。

3.有明确的体裁倾向。现在的高考作文，不限制考生一定要写哪一种体裁，但并不是在体裁上不作要求，千万不能写成四不像的文章。体裁上还是有要求的，或小说或散文或小品或日记或记叙文等等。

4.要有一个好的题目。俗话说，题好一半文。什么样的题目是好的呢？美的、诗意的、有哲理的乃至诙谐俏皮的题目，都是好的，当然题目一定要与作文密切相关。例如《21世纪，你美吗？》、《一花一世界》、《赤兔之死》等高考满分作文，首先题目就抓住了阅卷老师的心。

5.要有集中而明确的主旨。主旨即中心意思。高考作文是限时限字作文，其主旨不可太复杂隐晦，必须让阅卷老师能快速抓住作文的主旨，切勿犯多中心的错误。

6.构思要巧妙。构思即打腹稿。胸有成竹，方可一气呵成；边想边写，往往胸无全局，只能强凑字数。要多想几个思路，比较比较，然后根据题目要求，根据立意深浅，根据你头脑里所储备的材料，根据自身作文的优势和缺点，选择一个较能发挥出高水平的思路。

7.要有征服人心的亮点。好作文一定要有“亮点”。这个亮点，或者是一条分析无懈可击的论证，或者是一段精彩动人的描绘，或者是出人意外又在情理之中的情节，或者是令人热血沸腾的激情，或者是令人顿悟的哲思……这样的作文才能征服人心，才有望得高分。