帮忙写英语作文（写全的话继续追分）

这次为你做了改动。。。。。。

July 6 2009

It was the first day of our summer holiday. All of us were very happy. Why? Because we have one months to do things we love to do. We are free.Although we have some homework. But we can finish them in several days. And the rest time we can make good use of. My god! We have been very tired after hard studying. In winter holidays, I want to have full sleepand eat good food in order to replenish myself. Last but not the least, I will have a good rest.
这是第一天，我们的暑假。我们大家都非常高兴。为什么？因为我们有一个月的事我们都爱做的事。我们很空闲.虽然我们有一些功课。但是，我们可以完成他们的若干天。其余的时间我们可以好好利用。我的上帝！我们已经很疲惫后很难学习。在冬季假期，我希望能有充分的很好吃的食物，以补充自己。最后但并非最不重要，我会好好休息。

July 14 2009

Today I found time was a cruel thing. Whoever is, time always goes on. It won’t stay to wait for somebody. You can’t use anything to exchange time. Time is also a fair thing. Although you have a lot of money or you enjoy high reputation, time won’t leave them more. Today I found I hadn’t enough time. Although I have more than a-month holiday, but I found I had a lot of things to do. I had a lot of homework to do and I am essential to complete the homework as soon as I have time.
今天，我发现时间是一个残忍的事情。无论什么人，总是对的时间。它不会留下来等待某人。您不能使用任何交流时间。时间也是一个公平的事情。虽然你有很多钱，或者您享有很高的声誉，时间不会离开他们更多。今天，我发现我已经没有足够的时间。虽然我已经超过一个月假期，但我发现我有很多事情要做。我有很多功课要做，我必须完成的功课只要我有时间。

July 16 2009

It was sunny today. I was excited. I got up at a quarter to seven. I made a appointment to meet at nine o’clock. After I had my breakfast, I went to Market . It was hot outside. When I arrived, my friends didn’t arrive. I waited for him in front of the KFC’s door. I haven’t seen them for a year. And in a year, we didn’t come into contact with others frequently. About ten minutes left, my friends arrived one by one. After we greeted,we went to play badminton in the Gymnasium. The match last for tow hours.Oh!I fill very happy today!
这是今天阳光明媚。我很兴奋。我得到了在六时四十五分。我应约九点钟去玩。之后，我有我的早餐，我去了市场。这是热外面。当我到达，我的朋友们并没有达成。我等待着他前面的肯德基的大门。我还没有看到他们为一年。并在一年内，我们没有接触到其他人频繁。约10分钟离开，我的朋友们来到一个又一个。在我们迎接，我们去体育馆打羽毛球。这场比赛最后的拖了2小时.Oh ，我非常高兴今天填补！

2009,July 21
I had a good time last weekend. On Sunday morning, I stayed at home and did my homework. The homework wasn’t difficult. After that, I played volleyball with my friends. It was tired, but very exciting. In the afternoon, I cooked dinner for my grandparents. It was a little difficult, I think. After dinner, I went shopping. I could be very happy. I had a relaxing weekend.
我有一个很好的时间上周末。星期天早上，我留在家里和我的家庭作业。作业并不困难。在此之后，我打排球我的朋友。这是很累，但非常兴奋。下午，我为祖父母煮晚餐。这是一个什么困难，我想。晚餐后，我去逛街。我可以逛得很开心。我有一个轻松的周末。
注：（祖父母和爷爷奶奶在英语中是一样的写法）

1.Notice
Fellow students,
May I have your attention please?I have something important to tell you.In order to celebrate National Day,we are going to hold a series of activities in front of the library at 8:00 on the morning of August 10th.Our headmaster will briefly introduce the activities to us.We're going to visit the museum and watch the performance at the centre square.We are going to have a basketball game at 10:30 too.The activities are so important that all the students are required to part part in them.Please don't be late.
That's all,thank you.

Student's Union

2.A Letter of Apology December 15th,1997
Dear Mr.***,
I am writing to apologize for not being able to attend the meeting yesterday.My son had a bad cold and high fever,so I had to stay at home to look after him yesterday.I know the meeting was very important.I am extremely sorry for that.
Regards

Yours
Ana