如果有不好的地方,请指教:内容是在暑假的一个星期天,我们去参加小明(化名)的生日会,我们大家给他带去许多食物,饮料和水果。还送他礼物。我们唱歌,跳舞,还玩了各种游戏。我们玩得很开心。直到晚上九点钟才回家!这真是难忘的一天啊~~正文: In the smmmer of a sunday .Iwent to Xiao ming's birthday party with some of my friends. We took a lot of food, drinks and fruits to him .Everyone also give a card . We made the cards by hand .At the party, we sang, danced and played many games .We didn't come back home until 9:00 in the evening.We were all tired ,but we had a good time ! What an unforgettable day!