帮我翻译以下内容： [摘 要] 万分感谢！

with the development of the marketing competition, we need to analysis the outer enviroment of the finacial administration and complete the finacial prewarning system; optimize the structure of capital, enforce the risk administration of financial activities. increase the level of risk consciousness of the the financial administrators incessantly, order the inner financial relationship of the company, balant the duty, power and benefits. Solve the problem with scientific financial strategies.
你这个中文内容就有点毛病，我稍稍有点点修改，就两处，第一处是第一行里加了“我们需要”，还有一处是最后一行“采用科学的财务决策方法解决问题。”
“随着市场竞争的日趋激烈,需要分析财务管理外部环境”不觉得这里少了主语吗？ 是谁需要..希望能帮到你
记得给分哟~我有任务在身O(∩_∩)O~~