老师让我们写自己的偶像 我想写张杰 英语好的 能帮帮吗 我想写好点 大家不要在有道或百度翻译 那都是错的

　　亲，这个你看行不行？还有一篇，我自己写的关于杰的饮食习惯的估计你用不上

　　My favorite singer Zhangjie is my favoritr singer.His English name is JASON.He was born on December twentieth ,1982 in Sichuan.When he was a student,most of his classmates liked listening his songs and watching his dance.He realized that he had a gift for singing.And what is the most important is that he likes singing all the time.He firstly appeared on stage when he was still a college student at the age of 21. At that time he took part in "My style ,My show". He was No1 in the end, but his life did not changed so much because of it . He dreams of buying a large and comfortale house for his parents.So he took part in the"Super Boy" with enormous pressure. But after that,more and more people know him,I also became his fan.He has had four records so far,soon he will have a new record. Last year , he finally bought a house for his parents.The reason why I admire him so much is that :He sings very well,with a very unique voice and handsome as well as sunny simle.He is the most outstanding singer in my heart.He has many nice qualities.He is a perfect man.I will support Jason forever! 看看你是否满意....你自己也应该多多修改下，加入你自己的想法啊