紧急求助！研究生面试， 请高手给我修改一下英文自我介绍！水平有限没有完全按照中文稿写，通顺流畅即可。

"I am truly glad and excited to be here for the interview this morning. Firstly, allow me to introduce myself.
My name is xxx, 24. I come from Hohhot, the capital of Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region . I graduated from the College of Fine Arts, xxUniversity in 2010. I majored in xx.

Character, hobbies & Practical experiences:性格，爱好，实践经验
I am an open-minded, cheerful person with wide interests. I enjoy sports, games, movies, books, swimming and skiing . During the four years in campus, I was invoved in many activities organised by clubs and Design Societies, such as art festivals, topics study, forums etc.

Further, I am also very interested in Interaction Design and multimedia presentation. In July 2009,I completed my graduation project which was related to national badge design and user interface design . [???On top of that, I also participated in some interactive projects about xxx （太空家园官）system in the 2010 World Exposition.???] Upon my graduation, I worked for about a year with [xx company/department??], and gained experience in some interactive exhibition projects. My visit to the 2010 World Expo was very useful in giving me ideas about my profession.

The major that I hope to pursue here is Interaction Design. I realized that in recent years , as Interaction Design became more popular, a new epoch had begun for displaying design. I trust that with my experiences and knowledge gained from your [school/college/university?] I am able to contribute to national culture's expression. At present, with my limited knowledge, I must admit that I can only contribute insignificantly to the profession. So I think my further study at your esteemed [school/college/university?] is urgent and vital for me to achieve my goal. Under proper guidance and supervision from the tutors/lecturers, I hope to complete my post-graduate studies. If given a place, I promise that I shall work hard and intelligently to gain as much knowledge as possible from this [school/college/university?] so that I am qualified and capable of serving my society and people.

I sincerely hope that my application will be considered favourably. I thank you from the bottom of my heart for your kind attention.
Thank you again."
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Notes:
bright=聪明;; humourous=幽默; campers=camping营员们; esteemed=敬佩;
campus=校园
; finished=完了; completed=完成

个人意见，商榷一下 这是英语部分，你觉得还行我就写汉语部分
1.let me introduce myself
变成Allow me to introduce myself
2.invoved in 最好别在这里，它强调一种状态而不是主动，鄙人觉得take an active part in更好
3.in campers 是in campus
4. project （with） the national badge design.... of比较好吧
5. pursue for my further education is Interaction Design
.....devote myself into Interaction Design 如何（显得很激情活力）
6.has playing a role of ，变成will contribute a lot to
7.can do many things in a superficial level owing to lack of ample knowledge and ability
可以 变成I will train and perfect myself with hardworking(扬长避短....虽然意思差不多...= =）

专业词语如 Interaction Design and multimedia presentation我不太清楚是否恰当，恕我无法在这里提出一些意见

have graduated , majoring in, campus(not campers)......可能还有一些要改，问问其他大虾。如果是非英语专业，个人认为面试的自我介绍三分钟就够了，关键是流畅清楚。祝你成功！

in campers 是in campus