nice to meet you! i am so glad that i got the chance to join the interview. first,let me introduce myself. my name is TS,21years old. i am a saler before and have lots of experiences in saling. my english is not very good. but i have keep learing it and i believed that my english is improving.
i am a outgoing, optimism,responsible. i have strong abolity to adjust to a new environment and i am good at cooperating with others.i am willing to learn everything to improve my quality.
though i lack working experience, but i think i can finish all the tasks our company give me though my hard working.
i am glad that i can take part in this interview and i am sincerely hope that i can join this company to realize my dream. please give my a chance. Thank you.
觉得中文部分有些地方其实有点冗长, 英文介绍和中文介绍不一样,简介明了更好,老外也更喜欢。最后一段稍微做了修改,觉得这样更好。其实不要说出自己英文不大好更好,而是换一个角度说,比如说自己一直在学英语,英语也一直在进步这样说,这样会让老外觉得你又诚实又自信。中国人喜欢说自己英语讲得不好,这种谦虚不适合表现在面试上。以上意见仅供参考。
有些地方做了调整,希望能帮得到你!加油
Hello everyone! My name is TS, I am very glad to have the opportunity for this interview. I am 21, and have been working in sales for the last few years. I apologize for my English, I am still learning to improve it.
As for my personality, I am open minded and responsible. Also I can adapt myself very well in different environment. In work, I am a good team player with the capability to actively collaborate with others. Also, I always take every opportunity to learn and improve myself in the work.
Although I am not so experienced, I am dedicated to catch up with hard work and passion. So I hope you can be assured of the quality of my work.
To conclude with, I appreciate this interview opportunity very much. If I could join your company, I will make sure to do every endeavor in my work as well as to develop myself on this great platform.
Thank you.
Good morning sir(Mr.xxx), I'm so glad that you give me this chance. My name is xxx and I'm 21 year old. I can't speak English very well, but I'm studying hard on it.
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Good morning! Sir,Its my pleasure to be here, my name is TS,I'm 21years old, I works as a sales. my english is not good,but I am keep learning.
I am easy going and work seriously,goog team work,and keep learning and improve myself from every details.
I will work hard even though I am less of exprience, To be sure of every task.
I am so appriciate you can give me this chance be interviewed,I am sure i will work hard if i have this honour to work here.thanks!
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