(不要改动过于大,多改点没事)先问问这句话啥意思?
第一段最后一句没译出,连接还可以更紧密点
1,These stone lions are of great artistic value.(这有点断) On one of the balusters at the southeast end of the bridge sits a lion with an ear pricked up, as if listening intently to the sounds of the water underneath and the conversation of the people passing by. On July 7,1937, the first shot of the War of Resistance Against Japan(1937--1945) rang out beside the Lugou Bridge.
1,These stone lions are of great artistic value,particularly the one on the south baluster of the bridge's east end. With an ear erected ,the lion seems to be listening attentively to the chattering underneath and passengers' talks. On July 7,1937,the first shot of resisting against the Japanese imperialist fired at the Lugou Bridge,raising the curtain on the the War of Resistance Against Japan(1937--1945) .
2,Sunny or rainy, Hangzhou looks its best in spring. In summer the fragrance of lotus flowers gladdens the heart and refreshes the mind.(people's hearts and refreshes their minds) Autumn brings with it the sweet scent of laurel flowers, and chrysanthemums are in full bloom. In winter the snow scenery looks just like jade-carvings, charming and beautiful. The ever-changing aspects of the beauty of West Lake makes one care-free and joyous.
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1. 高竖起一只耳朵:a lion with an ear pricked up: (pricking up)
2. 在卢沟桥响起了抗击日本帝国主义的第一声炮响,揭开了抗日战争的序幕。 the first shot of the War of Resistance Against Japan(1937--1945) rang out beside the Lugou Bridge.(翻得不好。 The first shot from the Lugou Bridge ignited the War of Resistance Against Japan)
3. Hangzhou looks its best in spring. (looks best)
4.The ever-changing aspects of the beauty of West Lake makes one care-free and joyous.(前面aspects, 后面是make,主谓一致)
小小意见,参考一下。总体翻得很好,我肯定不行。
1, these lions high artistic value, especially in the south east of railings on a stone lions, erected a high ears, He seemed to listen to the sound of flowing water underneath the past and pedestrian conversation. July 7, 1937, the Marco Polo Bridge in a round of fighting Japanese imperialism clear first hit. kick off the war of resistance against Japan. 2, Hangzhou in the spring, desalination equipment thick paper, have affordable; Summer husband blowing and perfume; Fall Guizhi fragrance of chrysanthemum struggle Yan; Winter, King installed Yuzhu, pretty quick. West Lake to kaleidoscope charms were soothing.