中文转换英文，不要转换器!

一楼的是中式英文吗？下面是我的翻译。if you are a good junior school student ,you can attend a good senior school .After that ,with your hard working you can attend a good college.In each term of the school ,we have 4 important test,two mouth-test ,a final exam .After the examiantion we have a summer holiday .since i attend the senior school ,i become much more nervous.if i become a colleger ,i will be more relax.how about you?on the other hand ,have you decided to see the expo in shanghai?

Outstanding junior high school student, you can get into better high schools, and then to take a university. now junior each semester, we will hold four times the, two months, a segment, a phase of the examination. over the pass the summer vacation. the high school will be more nervous at the university may only be slightly relaxed. you? by the way, you're going to shanghai visit the fair?