April
the
third,we
went
to
Shanghai
Dongfanglvzhou(东方绿洲英语不会).It
is
a
large
park
with
a
lot
of
trees
and
flowers.The
air
in
Dongfanglvzhou
is
very
fresh.We
went
there
by
bus.It
took
us
one
and
a
half
hours
to
get
there.We
visited
a
lot
of
interesting
places.The
river
in
Dongfanglvzhou
is
very
clean.I
also
played
with
my
friends.I
ate
some
bread
at
lunch.Then
we
go
to
school.All
of
us
had
a
good
time.
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