高分求精准翻译几句话，希望语言简明，意思明确，并能用上丰富的句式和词汇

Thanks for the previous refusal experience which gave me a valuable opportunity to review myself, check the problem about my speciality and replan my career. I targeted to analyse the data with detail and surveyed the industry conditions this time, and on the basis I made my professional choice.

职业生涯 用 career 很好。

I appreciate the first refusal experience, it gives me a invaluable opportunity to have a detailed look at myself, examine the problems with the speciality which I applied for last time and lay out my own career again. This time I choose this speciality which bases on elaborate date analysis and trades investigation which I have made correspondingly.

LZ 我查了不少例句,职业生涯用的都是career, 如果你真不喜欢,可以换个occupation用了.

1.审视自己的问题review my situation
2.检查上次的专业问题（检查）reconsider my last option of speciality
3.我的职业生涯my lifework 或 my progress through life
3.有针对性地 objectedly
4.行业调查 sector investigations