A terrible night
It is 9:00 pm,and Tom is doing his homework.He can not be so careful,because his neighbors are making noises.He heard the dog barking and also someone quarreling.It is so terrible and even somebody is playing the guitar,singing and dancing so loud.So Tom asks his neighbors to be quiet,because he is doing homework.His neighbors agree.Finally,Tom can be careful again.
没有用过去式 可以自己改一下 也没用TOM做第一人称