英语作文。（初二）my ideal school

What is my ideal school,you may ask.Now let me tell you about it.
My ideal school is one where there is a good environment of nature,which is clean and tidy and in order an, where there is a quiet environment for study and life and above all where there are many good teachers who teach and serve their students wholeheartedlyso that students can study easily and comfortably to achieve their goals to be tallents needed by the country.
This is my ideal school ,one I desire to go to!

My school is at Haimen Town. It is very big and beautiful. There are forty-three classes in it. When you come to our school, you can see the modern teaching building. Our teachers work and do practice in it. Behind the building, there are two classroom buildings and a school library. In the library there are thousands and thousands of books. After class you can borrow the books you want and also you can read them in the reading room at any time. Beside our classroom, there is a big playground. At about 4:30 p.m. every day, many students play football, basketball and some of them play tennis. All the playground is alive.
Our school is a model school in Jiangsu. I like my school very much.

What is my ideal school,you may ask.Now let me tell you about it.
This is my ideal school ,do you want to go there?

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