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Stay in sensationalization stage
If the electronic commerce the integrity of the concept of measure of the tourism industry of our country electronic commerce development the present situation, China's tourism e-commerce is still at the primary stage.According to statistics, in 2006 China's online transactions 31200000000 yuan, really come into contact with the electronic business people accounted for only about 34.8 of all Internet users.At present, the tourism industry and the realization of the electronic commerce limited to the various instruments (such as ticket booking, tickets, tickets etc.), tour booking, hotel reservation and sending email and, in short, is basically in the online inquiries and reservation, the network of trading and clearing the stage.

这个这么专业，要看很久的呢