你的作文写得很棒！思路清晰，观点例子也完善。中间有一点语法错误。希望继续努力。一下是我的修改，期望你的文章会更好。I think that we should grow up with good books, especially during the period of our studying. Because the good books can provide benificial knowledges to us. They can not only make us to be a person with lots of knowledge, but alos can tach us to be a kind and knowldgeable person which do pa graet help to our growing up. Although the books are lifeless and cannot talk like our human beings, thay can talk with us by the informational workds which teach us a lot in many aspects. Tese inforamtion are opercious for they can make us grow up more healthily and happily. For example, they can teach us how to survive in an dangerous condition, how to do things correctly etc. So i do think our growing up can not be devided with the good books. At the same time, we should make good use of the good books.
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