初二英语作文80词,叙事的，寒假的作业。。求高手指点

I had a great time on the day off. In the morning, I went to the aquarium. Can believe it? I saw a big octopus. It is so big that there were too many people watching it. Also, there were many fishes. They are not only beautiful but also clever. After lunch, I went to the park with my parents. Because there was a kite show. I like flying kites. I think we can see all kinds of kites. And I took many photos because they can help me to remember the kite show forever.
As the saying goes,All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy! So do you want to go with me next weekend?

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