帮我修改一下英语作文。尤其是纠正一下错的语法。急求。在线等。

[原文改错]
1.soom 拼写错误 应为some；
2.拼写不规范，建议将speaked改为spoke；
【作文评析】
正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；请注意词汇表达的多样性及拼写错误，尤其加强学术词汇的使用；层次欠清晰，衔接成分很少。
【例文】
It was a bright, sunny day. I rode my bike to the park.I took some books outside and sat on the grass.While I was reading carefully, two kids beside me were talking loudly. They were so noisy that I can't read anymore."Please speak softly," I put down my books and speaked to them. But they just looked at me and laughed. I looked down.To my surprise, I found my books missing. Then these two kids ran to the Center Park. I followed them and I found my books were under a tree, near the lake. A monkey was playing with them.Then I quickly threw a stone to the monkey, and it ran away. I picked up my books and eventually got back home. What a terrible day!

嘻嘻，这是我用批改网给你改的，怎么样？
求采纳
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some 一些，你拼错了