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With the continuous development of market economy in our country, the economic development of the stock market and real estate market huge progress for China's national economic development and the improvement of people's living standards have brought huge economic benefits and social benefits, but the bubble risk also caught the attention of the bank supervision department. Based on existing in the process of capital operation of commercial bank credit risk carries on the analysis and research, and proposes the corresponding risk prevention strategies, to promote the western commercial bank credit fund use benefit increase inevitably can play a good help.
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Abstractwith the development of China's marketeconomy,bringthe enormous economic benefits andsocial benefits ofgreat progress ofeconomic development ofthe stock market and real estatemarkettothe development of national economyandthe improvement of people's living standard,but thebubbleproblemsalso greatlyby the banksupervisiondepartments concerned.Through the analysis andstudy ofexistingprocessusing thecommercialbank credit fundsofrisk,and puts forward thecorresponding risk prevention strategies,to promoting westerncommercial bank creditfunds useefficiencywill be able tohelpa good.
Keywords:Commercial Bank;credit funds;useefficiency;risk response
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