“当我的语法错了或是语言搭配不当时请提醒我并把你改过的句子告诉我”英文怎样翻译？ 急用 ，谢谢。

Please remind me of any grammatical mistake and wrong collocation, and tell me the corrected sentence.

When my grammer is wrong ,or my languege does't match each other well please tell me and change it into the truth to tell me

Please let me know when I have grammar mistakes or use weird phrases or sentences, and please tell me your corrected version.

Please remind me (in case) of my grammatical mistakes or wrong collocations, and tell me the sentences (that) you corrected.

When I make grammar mistakes or use the wrong words,please remind me and send me the corrected sentence.