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几乎每个人都知道，吸烟有害健康，并且吸烟还会污染空气。因此，我建议一些吸烟的人放弃吸烟。尽管这有点困难，但是只要尽力去做，努力克服戒烟上的一些问题，总还是可以摆脱吸烟的困扰。加入你能接受我的建议，而且尽力去做，我相信你一定可以身体健康，同时也为保护环境做出了贡献，这真是令人快乐的事情！
Almost everyone knows that smoking harmful to health, smoking and air pollution will be. Therefore, I suggest that some smokers to give up smoking. Despite this somewhat difficult, but as long as the endeavour to do, quit on efforts to overcome some of the problems, can still emerging from the smoking problem. I join you can accept the proposal, but to do so, I believe you will be able to physical health, but also to protect the environment made a contribution, it is really a happy thing!

One day， a student named Tom in Grade One was smoking in the front of the classroom. At that time the headmaster Mr Green saw the student smoking and asked him which grade he was in. He told the headmaster he was in Grade One and that he couldn’t read yet. “ Do you see the slogan ” NO SMOKING “ on the wall？ ” the headmaster asked. Students in the school are not allowed to smoke and it’s a bad habit for students to smoke. We know smoking does harm to students’ health. They must get rid of the bad habit as soon as possible.