雅思写作高分范文：老人生活在养老院好还是在家好

题目：
Should old man live with young people together, or should they live in the clubs for old men? Please discuss.

思路：
养老院的好处1：年轻一代太忙了，让他们照顾老人不现实，所以跟年轻人一起住，老人们肯定无法得到很好的照顾。而养老院不同，它们能提供健康规律的食品，全天候的护理，以及各种娱乐设施，这些绝对让老头们乐不思蜀。
养老院的好处2：老人们能在这里找到同年龄的玩伴，这让他们不孤单。
养老院的好处3：在养老院也能避免家庭冲突。举例，年轻人和老年人的生活方式是不一样的，甚至是对立的。年轻人喜欢热闹和刺激，老年人喜欢安静，如果生活在一起，肯定会有不愉快和冲突出现。

范文（Band 9）：
Nowadays, we have stepped into an old-man world. Many countries and governments are much concerned about the situation confronting us, especially how old men can live a happy life. Under this circumstance, many old-man clubs bamboo up with the view to providing old men a better place to settle down. In my opinion, I think this is a good practice to solve old-man problem.

To sum up, I think the appearance of old-man clubs is a good thing for old people. It provides the old people with a better environment. But old-man clubs are not a paradise definitely, which is a compromise to family intimation.（293）