如何用英语介绍一个城市的景点句子？

例文:
Shanghai is one of the largest cities in China and it is also the business and financial center of our country.The Huangpu River flows through the city.There are many new constructions and buildings in the Pudong district including the famous Oriental Jewel Tower.There are many great shops and stores along the Nanjing Road,the main commecial road in the city.Millions of tourists and business people come to the city every day and enjoy Shanghai's food,scenery,and life.
上海是中国最大的城市之一,它也是我国商业金融中心.黄浦江穿过这座城市.在浦东地区有很多新的建筑群和大楼,包括著名的东方之珠.南京路上有很多很好的商店,它是这座城市最主要的商业路.每天都会有很多的旅游者和商人来到这里享受上海的饮食、景点和生活.