急急！请英语高手帮忙解答一下一个英语问题，在线等！

1.Born in a small town in South China in 1968,he grew up to become a(a要去掉，become+职业不加冠词) musician.
于1968年出生与中国南部小镇的他长大后成为一位音乐家。

2.The girl is too young. （问题应该是出在too上……其实口语里特定语境也可以用的，建议改做very）
这个女孩很年轻

3.We entered the shop,and a saleswoman greeted us,and all kinds of shoes were on the shelves,and the prices were quite reasonable,and a lot of customers were buying them. （Chinglish很严重的……建议改成and all kinds of shoes were on the shelves,of which the prices were quite reasonable,and a lot of customers were buying them.当然可能还有其他问题……）
我们进入商店，售货员向我们打招呼。各种各样的鞋摆在货架上，价钱非常合理，很多顾客在挑选它们。

4.He visited all the famous historical monuments of this ancient city,and he also found out that the people of the city had to pay heavy taxes. （我觉得问题可能出在find out上，这个词我们学的是经过努力或者运算得出结论，而不是简单的发现，建议改为find）
他参观了这座古老城市所有有名的历史遗迹，而且发现这里的市民要付很重的税。

5.Shakespeare was one of the greatest dramatists.
（我觉得这道题的问题出在greatest上，可能出题人觉得英语的最高级有排他性，其实这句话我觉得是对的。）
莎士比亚是最伟大的戏剧家之一。

6.The singing in the film is good and the actors act wonderfully well. （这句话很难改……有一句话是The play is acting wonderfully well. 这个剧本上演非常成功。可能是IN这个介词有问题吧……或者把ACT改成PERFOEMENCE。希望大家指教。）
电影中音乐很好，演员演出非常出色。

7.Jane is better at singing English songs.（be good at不能写成be better at）JANE非常擅长英语歌曲。

改错题
1."in south of china "
2."so young "
3."entered into"固定搭配
4."the people of the city have to"因为是一直以来都要交那么重的税。一般时
5."one of the greater "greatest指的是唯一
6.去掉"well"。于前面wonderfully重复
7."is good at"固定搭配，意为：擅长于某项事务

1.Born in a small town in South （此处加of） China in 1968,he grew up to become a musician.
2.The girl is too young. (无语法错误)
3.We entered （加into）the shop,and a saleswoman greeted us,and all kinds of shoes were on the shelves,and the prices were quite reasonable,and a lot of customers were buying them.
4.He visited all the famous historical monuments of this ancient city,and he also found （out去掉） that the people of the city had to pay heavy taxes.
5.Shakespeare was （改成is;既定事实，所以用一般现在时）one of the greatest dramatists.
6.The singing in the film is good and the actors act wonderfully well. （wonderfully和well任意去掉一个，意思重复）.

7.Jane is good at singing English songs.（be good at doing sth固定句型，擅长做某事）

1:Born在中国南部的一个小镇上,他长大后准备成为一个音乐家.
2:那个女孩太年轻了.
3:我们进了一个商店,一个售货员向我们打招呼,里面有很多鞋而且价格也很便宜,有很多顾客在买.
4:他游玩了那坐古城所有的名山而且发现那里的人都有很重的税.
5:莎士比亚是伟大作家中的一个.
6:电影中的这首很好听,演员演的也很好.
7:Jane擅长唱英文歌.

这个题目让改错。
任务：改正以下句子中的错误。
1.1968年出生在中国南方一个小镇，他成长为一位音乐家。to改为and
2.这个女孩太年轻。too改为very
3.我们走进商店，一女售货员问候我们，所有种类鞋子都在架上，价格也比较合理，很多顾客在买鞋。
4.他参观了这个古老城市的所有著名的历史纪念碑，他也弄清楚，这个城市的人们不得不付沉重税收。historical改为historic
5.莎士比亚是最著名的戏剧家之一。was改为is
6.这部电影里的歌曲很好，并且演员表演很完美。singing改为song
7.简擅长唱英文歌曲。better改为good