1. I was here in Britain for my holiday--I am here ... .
(这里没有特别强调是过去的某一个时间我在英国,如I was in Britain for my holiday a week ago。可以理解是跟前面的I’m LiLei 类似,是一般性的表述,我现在在英国度假,在2月8日那天发生了一件事情......)
2. in the morning of February 8th--- on the morning
(具体的某一天的早上、下午、晚上,用on,这里2月8日是具体的某一天)
3. found out a lost suitcase ----found a lost suitcase
(find“找到、发现”,通常指找到或发现具体的东西,也可指偶然发现某物或某种情况。find out意为“找出、发现、查明”,多指通过调查、寻问、打听、研究之后“搞清楚、弄明白”,通常含有“经过困难曲折”的含义。 这里是偶尔的发现了一个行李箱,并没有是经过特别研究调查的找到)
4. I waited patient for ----I waited patiently for
(waited是动词,后面要用副词来修饰,因此用 patiently)
5. so nobody came for it.---but nobody
(我在那里等了一段时间,但是并没有人来认领,根据逻辑判断)
6. I had no choices but to---I had no choice but to
(have no choice but to do sth. 不得不做.....)
7. hand them in ---hand it in
(文章说的是一个行李箱suitcase,是单数)
8. what is just as big as----which is just as...
(which 引导的定语从句,修饰前面的suitcase)
9. When picking,-----When picked,
(when picked完整形式是when (it was) picked, 这句话的主语是 the suit case, 表示那个行李箱被”捡到那时,当时的状态)
10. I hope owner ---I hope the owner或者是I hope its owner
(加上定冠词the表示那个行李箱的主人,或者是用代词its)
I’m Li Lei,a high school student from China.I was (was 改am,现在式)here in Britain for my holiday.At around 8:30,in (in改on,具体的日期 要用on )the morning of February 8th,I found out(out 删掉,found out 表示经过努力终于找到,与语境不符) a lost suitcase near the exit of Heathrow Airport.I waited patient for some time,so(so改but, 这是一个转折) nobody came for it.
I had no choices (改做choice, 这里是单数)but to hand them in to the information center.It’s a black square suit case,what is (改 that was 那是一个.....)just as big as a school bag.When picking(when I picking,要加主语I,否则与后面的suit case 矛盾,会当做suit case 的逻辑主语),the suit case was half open and there were some documents and a camera in it.
I hope owner(owner 改the owner, 是特指,所以加the ) can come back and get it soon!